Lowell Whitaker (May 30, 2011 8:11:56 PM)
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Lowell Whitaker (May 30, 2011 8:12:07 PM)
sorry didnt see that it was going to be here
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:12:14 PM)
Oh it's okay
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:12:24 PM)
Just perfer these conversations recorded is all.
Lowell Whitaker (May 30, 2011 8:12:41 PM)
ill admit i had some trouble with the BG and np
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:13:51 PM)
*nods* That's what I was wanting to talk to you about. I havn't really gotten too far into your sheet yet. But I read through the BG. After the point of your Ghouling... there's like nothing to account for 24 years.
Lowell Whitaker (May 30, 2011 8:14:40 PM)
is it really that long? hmm i didnt mean to have a gap like that
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:15:12 PM)
You appear 26 years old and your Total age is 50
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:15:24 PM)
so ... figuring you were embraced after 7 years of beinga Ghoul
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:15:29 PM)
well actually
Lowell Whitaker (May 30, 2011 8:15:40 PM)
i was just sorta ball parking years in my head you know a few years in the child gang a few the parent and then 7 with the clan
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:16:47 PM)
*nods* with your total age being 50 we kinda expect a little more... now if you were to change your age to 26/26 meaning you were just embraced after your 7 year training and are being stationed in the US well that would be a little easier to accept out of your BG
Lowell Whitaker (May 30, 2011 8:17:35 PM)
i would gladly change that i made the sheet before my bg so i think i did 50 as a safe number cause i try to let bg take a life of their own
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:18:13 PM)
*nods* Like I said I really hadn't gotten too far into the sheet just yet only read the background and first thing I noted with the Age...
Lowell Whitaker (May 30, 2011 8:18:36 PM)
yeah =) it does seem off as i think over the bg
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:18:57 PM)
All Assamites know their sires Name... so going to need one made up for that
Lowell Whitaker (May 30, 2011 8:19:19 PM)
ok i wasnt sure about that its been a while since i have played
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:19:36 PM)
Yeah you can just make one up, we kinda perfer you stay away from the WW ones
Lowell Whitaker (May 30, 2011 8:20:40 PM)
lol yeah i bet umm...i need a name generator one sec on that
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:21:00 PM)
lol alright
Lowell Whitaker (May 30, 2011 8:21:56 PM)
Abbas Ra'if that ok?
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:22:11 PM)
works for me
Lowell Whitaker (May 30, 2011 8:22:19 PM)
cooleo
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:22:59 PM)
Also this is required in your background either as a second post or attached to the bottom of the first. your Ally (Customs) and Contact (Police) they need names, information and a small blerb about them
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:23:05 PM)
it's required for each
Lowell Whitaker (May 30, 2011 8:23:27 PM)
ok no problem ill try to figure that out how he got them
Lowell Whitaker (May 30, 2011 8:23:35 PM)
police i have an idea
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:24:32 PM)
A contact is just that someone you are Friends with... who you can call for the occasional favor.
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:24:44 PM)
And Ally is something more and would need a full background for him
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:24:58 PM)
How you became friends.. why he's an alley and not just a contact
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:25:00 PM)
ect
Lowell Whitaker (May 30, 2011 8:25:41 PM)
ok is that needed before sanch?
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:25:54 PM)
*nods*
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:26:07 PM)
that's just stuff that needs to get added to your background
Lowell Whitaker (May 30, 2011 8:26:11 PM)
and i have to step away my gf needs help. and ok
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:26:26 PM)
okay I will be on for a bit just hollar at me when you return
Lowell Whitaker (May 30, 2011 8:31:20 PM)
yeah im back so i need a bg for the allie ok
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:31:41 PM)
It doesn't need to be as extensive as your own but there needs to be information there.
Lowell Whitaker (May 30, 2011 8:32:02 PM)
yeah np
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:32:14 PM)
Alright looking over numerically your underspent on your sheet. I havn't looked at specific stuff yet but numerically your 4 underspent
Lowell Whitaker (May 30, 2011 8:32:28 PM)
ah ok
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:33:10 PM)
15 FB to Start, you have 4 points in Lores (as they count as knowledges), you have 7 points in Disciplines, 4 points in merits that = 15 points
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:33:17 PM)
Then you have 4 points in Flaws so you have 4 points.
Lowell Whitaker (May 30, 2011 8:34:04 PM)
+1 streewise and +1 athletics
Lowell Whitaker (May 30, 2011 8:35:49 PM)
so other then the bg im looking ok?
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:35:55 PM)
one sec
Lowell Whitaker (May 30, 2011 8:35:58 PM)
np
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:36:00 PM)
still reading over stuff
Lowell Whitaker (May 30, 2011 8:36:05 PM)
ah ok
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:37:19 PM)
Okay so how old are we going with your character... within the first year of his Embrace?
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:37:32 PM)
or a few more?
Lowell Whitaker (May 30, 2011 8:38:10 PM)
a few years max 5 years as a vamp to help explain cammi lore
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:42:35 PM)
Alright. So gang background I could see having a little brawl and maybe a point less melee... you know swinging a baseball bat and all... plus I have to look at this aspect.. you have Soft Hearted Flaw... so how do you justify 3 melee with that... 2 would be more acceptable.. 3
Lowell Whitaker (May 30, 2011 8:45:11 PM)
ok so i need to move some melee down
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:45:53 PM)
That flaw brings other things into question... your humanity. I asked Ame (the HST ) about it and she thinks if you want that flaw we should look at a humanity 8
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:46:54 PM)
So recommendations would be this. Melee to 2 and Stealth up to 2
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:47:04 PM)
so you have some sneaky sneak y ability
Lowell Whitaker (May 30, 2011 8:47:34 PM)
ok
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:47:55 PM)
Obfuscate 3 is Mask 1k faces... uses Manip + Performance.. so while I would like to see a few of your unspent points in it (atleast a 2) as it's a diff 7 roll
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:48:06 PM)
Are you dead set on the Soft Hearted?
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:51:12 PM)
Alright lets start here.
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:51:24 PM)
I just read over the creation rules as I do with each sanctioning ect
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:51:39 PM)
Your Merit Mole is on the Heavily Restricted list
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:51:41 PM)
http://www.sinful-illusions.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=62&t=3247
Lowell Whitaker (May 30, 2011 8:51:56 PM)
yeah i wasnt sure about that one
Lowell Whitaker (May 30, 2011 8:52:03 PM)
and i would like soft hearted
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:52:14 PM)
Alright... Lets see what we can do here.
Lowell Whitaker (May 30, 2011 8:52:33 PM)
im thinking i need to make some changes and get back to you
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:54:03 PM)
*chuckles* Here is what I would recommend. Your going to have to drop the mole obviously. So that leaves you with just 1 point to work with instead of 4. Drop Assamite lore to 1 giving you 3 points. Raise your Self-Control to 4 (thus giving you 8 humanity) and put the last point into WP
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:54:12 PM)
move melee 3 to 2, and add 1 to stealth
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:55:22 PM)
Then just FPM me when you think your ready again and we will give it a look over. Sound like a plan?
Lowell Whitaker (May 30, 2011 8:55:35 PM)
sounds good
Menthril (May 30, 2011 8:57:48 PM)
Alright I am on quite a bit and I check the forums regularly so if I don't respond quickly have Carla smack me and if I can I will get to as soon as I can okay
Menthril (May 30, 2011 9:01:06 PM)
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Lowell Whitaker (May 30, 2011 9:27:09 PM)
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