Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 1:15:50 AM)
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Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:16:07 AM)
Bear with me :) I might be a little slow because I am super tired!
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 1:16:44 AM)
i understand. i got home from work. 9 hours on my feet, kidney stone, collapsing arch
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:17:00 AM)
Ouch!
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:17:22 AM)
I just have kids to run around after and bf with mancold to also run around after, so I'm getting very little sleep at the moment. :)
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:17:31 AM)
Just going quiet for a bit while I read your background.
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 1:17:45 AM)
take a cup of coffee with you.
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:18:30 AM)
Don't tempt me! Otherwise I will take longer to get you iconed!
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 1:19:23 AM)
*gives dusk a shoulder massage*
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:22:54 AM)
sorry brb called afk
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 1:23:06 AM)
sokay
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:24:47 AM)
sorry back, reading again!
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 1:26:49 AM)
no prob
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:29:50 AM)
great background :)
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 1:30:52 AM)
thanks.
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:31:03 AM)
Luciferian?
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 1:31:16 AM)
yeah
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 1:31:54 AM)
god be damned, he's going to keep his promise to push the humans
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:32:27 AM)
Cool :) I just added the cital statistics to the top of your bg
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:32:32 AM)
Opening the sheet!
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:32:53 AM)
Just to be clear though... with his wife, he can make her look great and up her appearance but he can't stop her aging or reverse her aging.
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:34:44 AM)
aaand quiet again for a moment while I add up points!
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 1:36:03 AM)
he made her look younger. and most of my points are backgrounds. and some abilities to make up for the lack of law ability
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:37:56 AM)
You haven't got virtues, 3 points to spend, how shall I break them down for you?
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 1:39:01 AM)
*facepalm* forgot those... 2 across the board. those are being bought up with XP right off the bat
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:42:07 AM)
okay the quiet bit is done :) I know where your freebies have gone and read the bg so let me take a closer look at that allocation on the sheet
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 1:42:32 AM)
sure thing
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:44:03 AM)
It looks good except for some bg's and flaws.
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:44:09 AM)
I really like the background
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:44:21 AM)
But it reads as being for an eminence 2 char so I'd like to drop eminence by 1
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 1:44:40 AM)
ok
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:45:44 AM)
The other thing is the fame. This is up to you, but I kind of got the impression that Jerry was a somewhat classy lawyer, old boys club, scotch and cigars, political ties etc... that doesnt' really fit with the wham bam glam of being a tv lawyer
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:46:03 AM)
Are you sure you wouldn't rather ditch the fame in favour of some merits along the line of Pillar of the Community?
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 1:46:07 AM)
good point
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 1:46:49 AM)
actually, i was thinking of giving him some more influence
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:47:19 AM)
shall we lose the fame and look at some merits instead to reflect a char with a lot of integrity rather than media glam?
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 1:47:34 AM)
i can see that
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:48:47 AM)
With the influence, legal and beaurocracy I can see
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:48:55 AM)
I am not seeing street though with this char concept
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 1:49:05 AM)
he's a criminal lawyer
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 1:49:58 AM)
add to that, he has a thrall who's a fence dealing in stolen goods
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:50:00 AM)
I still don't think that will give him street cred at this point. I think we need to pick whether his influence is going to be in that high society law/politics way or in a law/street way.
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:50:27 AM)
I have no problem with you assigning your fence thrall a dot of street influence in their template.
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:50:34 AM)
That would probably work better.
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 1:51:02 AM)
maybe move it from street to media?
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:51:51 AM)
I can't really see media influence either off the bat, it's something you could certainly work towards
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 1:51:52 AM)
since he would have some pull, considering he's probably had plenty of dealings with them during high profile cases
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:52:14 AM)
But I'm seeing law, beurocracy, high society, maybe even a dot of police, or university.
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:53:26 AM)
We're really talking boardrooms, handshakes in gentlemans clubs, charity fundraising events etc with this kind of char
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 1:54:54 AM)
also criminal elements. he's a defense attorney that does pro bono work as a public defender if he feels the case has merit
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:55:02 AM)
police then?
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:55:20 AM)
but also keep in mind we have to add some allies/contacts to support this influence and we have limited poitns.
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:55:29 AM)
why don't we come back to it and see what's left to play with?
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 1:55:35 AM)
good point
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:55:58 AM)
so at the moment we have legal 2, beauro 1, politics 1
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 1:56:35 AM)
no high society either huh?
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:57:08 AM)
How about Allies 2 Judge/detective Contacts 2 Assistant DA/Campaign Manger.... or something like that.
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:57:23 AM)
oh yeah :) You have high there too
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 1:57:24 AM)
the assistant DA is one of his thralls
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:57:36 AM)
I can't give you the assistant da as your thrall on creation.
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:57:58 AM)
That's something you would have to play out in personal SL ic
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:58:00 AM)
It's too big
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 1:58:24 AM)
there goes a pact then
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:58:46 AM)
okay taken pacts down to 2
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 1:58:58 AM)
wife and say personal assistant?
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:00:37 AM)
Does that work for you?
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:00:53 AM)
That way you have a personal assistant/secretary in thrall to follow up a lot of these things for you.
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 2:01:12 AM)
honestly, i didn't think an ADA would be that big of a deal. there are usually several in a city that work for the district attorney
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:01:55 AM)
You can have one, you will just have to do it ic
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 2:02:41 AM)
that's fine
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:02:50 AM)
Okay so I'm willing to sanction you with 5 dots of starting influence, which is huge, but the character really supports it
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:03:01 AM)
We need between 3 and 4 allies/contacts to back that up though.
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 2:03:02 AM)
but the 2 pacts are his wife and the pawn shop owner
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 2:03:58 AM)
ok, so... take an ADA as an ally, maybe a judge, city clerk...
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:04:32 AM)
np how about Allies 2 ADA/Judge Contacts 1: City Clerk ?
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 2:05:14 AM)
that works. the clerk feeds him info, the judge and ADA give him a slight edge in trial when need be
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:05:44 AM)
Awesome :) Now I just need to take a look at those flaws since there are so many of them
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 2:06:44 AM)
he's a smoker, his job takes alot of his time, he has a heart condition which requires medication, and he has to buy the latest new thing when it comes out. he has 3 iPhones at home in his desk
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:08:22 AM)
Are you sure you want conspicious consumer?
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 2:08:44 AM)
it means he buys alot of useless crap that takes up his money
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:09:00 AM)
It also means he lives beyond his means
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:09:07 AM)
So he doesn't have a lot of available funds
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 2:09:26 AM)
lawyer, in the middle of a midlife crisis, with a demon in his head.
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:10:03 AM)
I don't mind letting you have it, just want to make sure you really want it
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 2:10:47 AM)
i'm sure. he has an image to keep.
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:11:21 AM)
did you get medicated from the players guide?
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 2:11:28 AM)
yes i did
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 2:11:39 AM)
all of my flaws are from the players guide
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 2:12:27 AM)
pg 86
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:12:37 AM)
I'm sorry, I really am super tired and can't find it.... oh thank you, I was about to ask for a page number
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:13:58 AM)
take a look at pillar of the community on page 80
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:14:06 AM)
I think it would really suit him and be extremely useful
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 2:14:36 AM)
witht he changes, do i have the points?
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:14:41 AM)
you do :)
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 2:15:00 AM)
ok
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:16:14 AM)
last sheet mechanic then I look at apoc and you are all done!
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:16:25 AM)
I think for a brilliant trial lawyer we really need expression at around 3
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:16:32 AM)
since that's what he'd use to argue cases in court.
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:16:37 AM)
It's currently 1
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:16:48 AM)
I'll put it to 2 as a free dot for the great bg
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:17:04 AM)
can you take a look at the sheet and see if there is a dot you could shift to expression?
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 2:17:07 AM)
take a dot from technology
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 2:17:17 AM)
wait
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 2:17:22 AM)
can't
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 2:17:28 AM)
that's less than 5
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:17:31 AM)
yeah sorry no freebies went there
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:17:57 AM)
nope performance 1, ettiquette 1, drive 1, technology 2 = 5
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:18:53 AM)
but to persuade people you will be rolling charisma + expression... I guess we can leave it at 2 though, that gives you a pool of 6 which is good.
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 2:19:19 AM)
and with silver tongue, i get 10 again
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:21:07 AM)
awesome :) Okay let me check the dots of your apoc form and we are done!
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 2:22:18 AM)
i have all the points laid out there. adds up to 16
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:23:32 AM)
Can't see immune to falling under devils or common.. devils have immune to fire
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 2:23:46 AM)
immune to falling is slayer
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:24:29 AM)
ahh it's scourge and you've added a point for it
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 2:25:10 AM)
him being the fastest messenger was mainly because he cheated. he would fall, burn through reentry, and hit the ground
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:27:58 AM)
okay take a look at it with the changes and tell me what you think
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 2:30:07 AM)
looks good to me
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:30:17 AM)
last thing
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:30:22 AM)
You paid for appearance 3
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:30:27 AM)
So he's not average looking
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:30:34 AM)
he is an attractive man at apeparance 3
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:30:42 AM)
So feel free to put that in the description!
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:30:49 AM)
And you are sanctioned :) Go grab your icon!
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 2:30:50 AM)
i dodn't want to have 2 4's in his socials
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:31:08 AM)
If you want to be averge looking I will give you the two 4's
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 2:31:43 AM)
awesome!
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 2:31:51 AM)
persuasive spec please?
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:31:54 AM)
you want the manip 4 and appearance 2?
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 2:32:01 AM)
yes!
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:34:01 AM)
Done, too easy :)
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:34:31 AM)
Thanks for being so open to making changes with regards to the backgrounds. I think with that merit and your influences, social stats and allies/contact he is a really formidable char.
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 2:35:05 AM)
he's meant to be the man behind the curtain
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:36:06 AM)
I think it's a great concept and the sheet is very cool!
Dusk (Jun 27, 2011 2:36:14 AM)
Relog for me so I can make sure your icon has changed?
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 2:36:16 AM)
thanks. i try
Jerry White (Jun 27, 2011 2:36:21 AM)
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