Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 7:06:24 PM)
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Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:07:15 PM)
Okay, apologies in advance. Demons are kinda complex to sanction so it may take me a little time to read all the history go through the sheet etc
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:07:18 PM)
Just grabbing my books!
Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 7:07:29 PM)
Not a problem Dusk.
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:09:20 PM)
Okay first things first :) Going to go quiet for a bit while I read the bg
Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 7:09:57 PM)
Thanks Dusk and no worries, take as long as you need. I'm very patient.
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:10:07 PM)
ty :)
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:11:20 PM)
Your initial concept reads more like a fiend than a malefactor
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:11:24 PM)
let me quickly check the books.
Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 7:11:31 PM)
why do you say that
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:11:38 PM)
While I do that.. can you throw something quickly at the top of your bg for me
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:11:44 PM)
Celestial Name:
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:11:47 PM)
House:
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:11:49 PM)
Faction:
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:11:53 PM)
Legion:
Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 7:12:40 PM)
I went by the beginnign of malefactor part of book of houses, where malefactors helped create stars, moons and such.
Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 7:12:45 PM)
beginning
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:14:11 PM)
Let me double check myself :) The general feeling is that the malefactors worked within the domain of earth itself, the rocks, earth etc Fiends were responsible for planetary movement, stars so forth
Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 7:15:59 PM)
Yes that's true but in the Malefactor section it did mention before they began work on Paradise itself they assisted with moons and such. I actually hadn;t remembered that until I reread it for this character.
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:16:36 PM)
this is the core book? Malefactor section?
Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 7:17:00 PM)
book of houses
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:17:21 PM)
kk let me open that. Do you have a page number to speed me up?
Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 7:17:53 PM)
sec in a room without my books, was the first pages
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:18:17 PM)
okay bad news I'm afraid
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:18:32 PM)
I just realised my book of houses is on my laptop, which my bf has taken to work.
Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 7:19:01 PM)
I can just take that stuff out of her history
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:19:08 PM)
I might have to leave you with casey tonight, look over the bg later when I have the laptop back and can double check the book, then sanction her tomorrow.
Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 7:19:18 PM)
its not really important to her concept
Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 7:19:35 PM)
It was just extra flavor
Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 7:20:02 PM)
Do you mind if I edit it?
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:20:08 PM)
sure thing :)
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:20:20 PM)
Or I'm happy to read up on book of houses and sanction her this time tomorrow
Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 7:20:22 PM)
Thanks
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:20:22 PM)
your call!
Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 7:20:35 PM)
If it was important I'd leave it. it really isnt
Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 7:23:04 PM)
Ok it's edited
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:24:57 PM)
Okay that's a lot of things that she did :) How about we pick one and focus on that? For example she was involved in making the deserts, in choosing the rocks that would be worn down to make sands, the perfect whites, the tiny glittering fragments that together would be the carpet of the deserts and beaches
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:25:02 PM)
That is very cool by itself.
Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 7:25:25 PM)
Sure we can narrow it dow
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:25:34 PM)
make those changes for me?
Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 7:26:19 PM)
Take out the work she did on mankind since many helped with that or leave it in?
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:26:38 PM)
I'd take it out and focus on the sands
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:26:45 PM)
I thikn that's a great concept for a malefactor
Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 7:29:14 PM)
Done
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:30:29 PM)
Okay the other thing is the nephalim tie in. Creating nephalim was something the elohim involved were dedicated to, creating new children to replace humans
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:30:36 PM)
I'm not sure how compatible that is with the rest of her bg
Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 7:31:47 PM)
This is another thing I took from book of houses where Zipacna handed out the pearl relics but I can change that too
Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 7:32:16 PM)
it was just an idea I got while rereading the book and hadnt been part of my original plan
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:33:38 PM)
Yeah it is just that being involved with the nephalim and being in love with humanity at the point is a dichotomy
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:33:50 PM)
The nephalim were pretty much to replace humanity
Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 7:37:22 PM)
Ok taken out
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:42:52 PM)
okay it's all good now!
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:42:56 PM)
Let me open the sheet :)
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:44:54 PM)
okay going quiet again while I add up points!
Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 7:45:02 PM)
No problem
Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 7:45:50 PM)
Hoping to eventually join the Ministry of Lions and get involved in Court this time around
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:50:29 PM)
Okay points are right, just a couple of things
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:50:40 PM)
I think she is a great bg etc but works as an eminence 1 character
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:50:51 PM)
I'd like to movie emience down to 1 and legacy up to 2
Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 7:50:53 PM)
Sure that's fine
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:51:37 PM)
the other thing is, are you sure you want her to be conscience 1?
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:51:45 PM)
From the bg I got a enduring care for humanity etc
Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 7:52:40 PM)
I actually went back and forth on that awhile, and was planning to write more in her BG to explain why but I completely forgot about it, the bg just kind of wrote itself
Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 7:52:47 PM)
lol
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:52:48 PM)
for the cool bg I am giving you a free ally (police requisitions) and free contact (accountant)
Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 7:53:15 PM)
So moving it to two dropping courage to two and lowering WP to 5 is fine
Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 7:53:26 PM)
Thanks!
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:53:59 PM)
okay just checking apoc form and we are done!
Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 7:54:24 PM)
Her apoc form is pretty combat related as a warrior I'll warn you
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:57:12 PM)
it's all good
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:57:29 PM)
Now looking at her carried equipment, there is a lot there, that she wouldn't necessarily walk around with
Dusk (May 11, 2011 7:58:01 PM)
Like the blacksmith hammer, swords etc
Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 7:58:03 PM)
We can move some of it to possessions I wasn't really thinking that she carried it constantly
Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 7:58:18 PM)
just that stuff she would carry if needed
Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 7:58:47 PM)
So it's all good
Dusk (May 11, 2011 8:01:17 PM)
you are all done :) relog for the icon
Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 8:02:07 PM)
Thanks Dusk, you're the best!
Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 8:02:13 PM)
*gives faith cookies*
Dusk (May 11, 2011 8:02:14 PM)
not a problem :)
Dusk (May 11, 2011 8:02:17 PM)
thank you!
Dusk (May 11, 2011 8:02:22 PM)
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Rachael Lyons (May 11, 2011 8:02:24 PM)
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