Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 6:50:18 PM)
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Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 6:50:26 PM)
Alright first things first
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 6:50:36 PM)
Appearance 4 is a no
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 6:50:44 PM)
she is a recovering meth addict
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 6:50:49 PM)
Let it rip.. i'll go with 3 :) I was reading up on that
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 6:50:55 PM)
meth rots your teeth and face
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 6:51:07 PM)
but also vampiric blodo heals too
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 6:51:11 PM)
no
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 6:51:22 PM)
Vampiric blood heals you to where you where when you were ghouled
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 6:51:34 PM)
it can't repair damage that was done before you were ghouled or embraced
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 6:51:36 PM)
She was not on meth when she was a ghoul
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 6:51:45 PM)
She was on meth before she was a ghoul
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 6:52:08 PM)
So is a 3 fine then? lol
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 6:52:11 PM)
This is the problem with a Player taking over a NPC that was controlled by a ST
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 6:52:27 PM)
Well on the stats it was app 4 sooo
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 6:52:29 PM)
3 is a stretch but I will allow it
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 6:52:53 PM)
Ok.. can you add the 5 in manipulation then i think that would be more suited for who she is?
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 6:52:53 PM)
Trusted Valet is a base NPC
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 6:55:47 PM)
Don't forget to remove the apperance spec from equipment..
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 6:56:11 PM)
Sorry i am still reading the BG
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 6:56:30 PM)
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Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 6:57:02 PM)
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Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 6:57:09 PM)
Sorry accidently closed the window
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:00:27 PM)
Alright so lets discuss a few things
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:01:20 PM)
First things that jump out. Police Influence.. not justified in background, you have no contacts at all to give you a foot in the door to even begin to have any influence.
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:02:02 PM)
Oh yea i forgot about that you can remove that if you want i figured well being a drug dealer some do have influence in police.. there are bad cops and good cops
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:02:07 PM)
Allies 1 ... who is it?
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:02:24 PM)
the gang she hangs with.
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:03:04 PM)
Your supposed to speak for Sledge right?
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:03:10 PM)
that's your concept..
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:03:24 PM)
yet you have no Expression, Etiquette
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:04:23 PM)
Yep..
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:04:30 PM)
well jealous drugdealer is the concept
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:04:43 PM)
Resources 3 requires a good justification, this comes directly from the creation rules. Sledge has resources 2 so your needing to be getting income from somewhere else to have the 3 that needs to be in the background
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:05:19 PM)
Chop shop is hers she builds bikes.. bikes you can get good money from.
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:05:39 PM)
Yeah if you can get a deal on the parts
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:05:41 PM)
I am a biker in RL i know lol :P my husband rides a harley
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:06:15 PM)
but if you want im willing to lower it to 2 and gain it icness ime asy to work with you should know that
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:06:18 PM)
you would be better put to use a few points in having a contact in that line
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:06:49 PM)
to help you aquire parts at a discounted rate
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:06:49 PM)
Thats fine i'll go with whats best for the pc. :)
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:07:10 PM)
Yea pwn shops too have great deals LOL ever watch that pwn shop star show on history channel?
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:08:37 PM)
Sorry for being a pain on this but I need justifications for these merits... Catlike Ballance, Acute Sense and Enchanting Voice....
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:08:51 PM)
Oh I understand... completely. Enchanting voice was for the leadership.
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:09:47 PM)
I used Acute sense for her sight due to she likes to use guns instead of fist when it comes to fighting.. the catlike balance you can remove not sure why i even had that.
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:09:48 PM)
Thus why I want adaquate justification in the background
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:10:13 PM)
your entire concept hinges on you being the leadership type and yet you have nothing in the background about it
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:11:12 PM)
I don't think you can edit your sheet can you?
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:11:33 PM)
Being a Drug dealer you need leadership.. you need to have a strong voice to sell.. do you not? and no not after it has been presanctioned.. I let you do that.. if you like
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:12:43 PM)
Running a business you need leadership as well manipulation, etc etc...
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:12:48 PM)
yeah no sorry there needs to be more then that. I work in a environment where I interact with alot of drug users and dealers and I can tell you not a one of them is leadership material, or has any catching voice.
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:12:59 PM)
you need to justifiy it in the Background history
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:13:08 PM)
I am not saying you can't have it
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:13:19 PM)
I am saying you need to write it in there so that it's justified
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:13:25 PM)
because right now it's not.
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:13:58 PM)
Ok, what do you see for the history and sheet what needs to be moved around? Im willing to work with ya hun im not arguing or anything.
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:15:43 PM)
These are a few things that I see that need to be adjusted. You need atleast 1 in expression or intimidation if your gonna be the leader of a biker gang you better be able to talk your ass off and be charaismatic, or you better be a manipulative / intimidating bitch
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:16:06 PM)
I am gonna try and put your sheet back under your control
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:16:09 PM)
let me see if it works
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:16:15 PM)
That i like.. lol ok
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:16:19 PM)
and thanks hun.
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:17:20 PM)
alright go and see if you can edit your sheet
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:17:35 PM)
k
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:18:02 PM)
Yep i can. thanks.. it will only take a moment
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:18:08 PM)
you need a craft
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:18:12 PM)
noted in the spec's
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:18:18 PM)
yea i thought i had craft?
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:18:27 PM)
I do craft 3
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:18:49 PM)
I would like to see Etiquette so you can atleast interact with vampires who are way more powerful then yourself or sledge so that you don't step on toes
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:18:58 PM)
Yes you need to specify what craft it is
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:19:12 PM)
Craft is not all encompassing you have to pick one
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:19:13 PM)
LOL
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:19:36 PM)
Oh.. duh.. Building bikes.
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:19:44 PM)
drop the police influence,and pick up some kind of contact with the parts connection
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:20:01 PM)
ok.. Junk yard owner as contact?
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:20:02 PM)
Either justify the merits or drop them
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:20:08 PM)
Sure that would work
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:20:36 PM)
those are the things that I would like to see done and then we can go from there.
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:21:06 PM)
Ok.. add points in intimidation.... I could make manipulation my main spec, as In Persuasive...
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:21:09 PM)
The flaws are fine you don't need to do anything with those I can see them from the background and sledge's background
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:21:30 PM)
yea sledge met trixie before he was a vampire thats what he told me.
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:22:41 PM)
alright if your gonna work on those things now just FPM me when your finished
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:22:55 PM)
Ok question...
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:23:10 PM)
she would get her drugs to sell from a drug lord right?
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:23:44 PM)
she would get them from a connection..
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:23:57 PM)
ok putting 2 in contacts then
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:24:01 PM)
*nods*
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:24:18 PM)
Remember that Contacts and Allies need to be put in as a post on your Background thread.
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:24:22 PM)
Who they are, how you know them
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:24:24 PM)
ect
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:24:28 PM)
yea i will.. :)
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:24:35 PM)
im gonna put Sledge's player to work. ROFL
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:25:04 PM)
Alright get to work and PM me if I am still on when your done
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:25:10 PM)
kk
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:28:35 PM)
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Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:52:23 PM)
you dropped your allies 1?
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:52:38 PM)
Yea and added to contacts is that ok?
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:52:46 PM)
yeah it's fine
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:52:54 PM)
let me look this over and add up the points
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:53:02 PM)
I removed the other merits cept the one.. that makes sense.
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:53:44 PM)
*nods*
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:53:47 PM)
Alright you have 1 point left
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:53:57 PM)
Oh nice.. hmmm.. Intimidation?
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:54:04 PM)
that's 2 points
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:54:09 PM)
oh, Wp?
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:54:10 PM)
lol
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:54:10 PM)
you can add a BG or a WP
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:54:22 PM)
being who she is, Wp is more suited
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:54:50 PM)
alright I will edit it at this point
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:55:12 PM)
kk i also removed that from my sheet.. i hope i removed the enchantedvoice too from equipment not sure
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:56:31 PM)
Please remove Enchanted Voice from Gear Carried area while you're at it. :) I forget too
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 7:56:59 PM)
I am
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 7:57:04 PM)
Danke
Menthril (Aug 1, 2011 8:01:17 PM)
Alright log all the way out and come back
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 8:01:34 PM)
Woot danke. Lov ya.. lol
Trixie (Aug 1, 2011 8:01:37 PM)
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