SerenePrincess (Jun 11, 2011 9:55:58 AM)
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SerenePrincess (Jun 11, 2011 9:59:53 AM)
just reading the background now :)

Ajax Idomeneus (Jun 11, 2011 9:59:59 AM)
How'd the scen go last night?

Ajax Idomeneus (Jun 11, 2011 10:00:10 AM)
Seemed like alot of active particpants.

SerenePrincess (Jun 11, 2011 10:01:16 AM)
it was superb

SerenePrincess (Jun 11, 2011 10:01:30 AM)
that was the largest turn out i had seen ever for this venue

Ajax Idomeneus (Jun 11, 2011 10:02:15 AM)
I tried to follow the Mortal Instructions on producing public officals, however; I ended up being really thin on points.

Ajax Idomeneus (Jun 11, 2011 10:02:24 AM)
Being that I took about 10 Background Points alone.

Ajax Idomeneus (Jun 11, 2011 10:03:49 AM)
DtF really needs to revise it's point system to support both mortal and demonic entities.

SerenePrincess (Jun 11, 2011 10:06:54 AM)
ok, before I go any further, we need to talk about your background... it states that your demon was responsible for "the natural cycle of life and death"... unfortunately, that is simply not possible. Those two are the responsibilities of a scourge and a slayer, respectively. A devourer with those responsibilities would make both of those other two houses obsolete. Remember, devourers were the ones who created plants, and animals, and humans. They did not control who lived and died.

Ajax Idomeneus (Jun 11, 2011 10:07:50 AM)
I am pretty sure in the Animal Kingdom the Rabisu where responisble for regulating over population.

Ajax Idomeneus (Jun 11, 2011 10:08:06 AM)
Houses of the Fallen around page 70 or so.

SerenePrincess (Jun 11, 2011 10:08:18 AM)
No, that was the slayer. The halaku were the ones responsible for death, period.

Ajax Idomeneus (Jun 11, 2011 10:08:32 AM)
I am looking it up.

Ajax Idomeneus (Jun 11, 2011 10:10:20 AM)
Ah well.

Ajax Idomeneus (Jun 11, 2011 10:10:33 AM)
As one generation followed another the cycle of life was fueled by death.

Ajax Idomeneus (Jun 11, 2011 10:10:57 AM)
I misread the apparent meaning on the sentence.

Ajax Idomeneus (Jun 11, 2011 10:11:15 AM)
Both plants and animals were cared for with equal attetion and delicate balanace was maintained.

SerenePrincess (Jun 11, 2011 10:11:51 AM)
"It was not long before life made use of the 'LAST HOUSE'. As one generation followed another, the cycle of life was fuled by death." That is specificlly envoking the last house, the Halaku... the Slayers.

Ajax Idomeneus (Jun 11, 2011 10:12:40 AM)
Well its not hard to remove a line.

SerenePrincess (Jun 11, 2011 10:14:04 AM)
quick question, who was Azah-Rhan?

Ajax Idomeneus (Jun 11, 2011 10:15:11 AM)
Houses of the Fallen Page 110 underneath The Hierarchy. Azag-Rhan, the Power of Moment Unseen. He was responisble for all the Rabisu on the ground while Abaddon was responisble for those in the air.

Ajax Idomeneus (Jun 11, 2011 10:15:37 AM)
While Calentat handled those that were between the ground and the air.

SerenePrincess (Jun 11, 2011 10:17:33 AM)
Ok, stop. Before we go further, I have a problem with plagarizing the book. You are taking specific lines and pretty much copy/pasting them onto your background. I am sorry, but I am uncomfortable reading a background that uses the book in such a manner. If you wish this sheet to be looked over, please keep in mind copyright laws and rework the lines you quoted in your background to something that is not a direct line from the book, or give the author of such their credit for coming up with those lines. I am not saying your sheet is not approved; please, do not misunderstand. I am merely asking that you rework a little bit of your background.

Ajax Idomeneus (Jun 11, 2011 10:20:25 AM)
So you want me to add a Works Cited Page for Demon the Fallen?

Ajax Idomeneus (Jun 11, 2011 10:20:47 AM)
I'll put at the Bottom Works Cited Book Reference.

SerenePrincess (Jun 11, 2011 10:20:52 AM)
No, I want you to change the wording to paraphrase what you are wanting to say.

Ajax Idomeneus (Jun 11, 2011 10:21:05 AM)
Why? These are historical events that took place.

Ajax Idomeneus (Jun 11, 2011 10:21:12 AM)
I can't rewrite the history of DtF.

Ajax Idomeneus (Jun 11, 2011 10:21:25 AM)
My Mortal creation has nothing to do with the cannon book.

Ajax Idomeneus (Jun 11, 2011 10:21:32 AM)
Why? Because there are no preset guidelines.

SerenePrincess (Jun 11, 2011 10:21:52 AM)
Yes, they are canon history. However, I have seen several people state the exact same thing that is listed in the book, but do not need to copy and paste the lines from the book to state what they did during the war.

SerenePrincess (Jun 11, 2011 10:22:00 AM)
Or before the war, or after the war.

Ajax Idomeneus (Jun 11, 2011 10:22:14 AM)
Whatever.

Ajax Idomeneus (Jun 11, 2011 10:22:22 AM)
Thanks for looking him over.

SerenePrincess (Jun 11, 2011 10:22:23 AM)
I am not wanting you to rewrite the history. That's just silly to even try.

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