SignalDancer (May 26, 2010 11:59:17 PM)
i'm still working on your merits flaws and total point spend, but your abilities are 7/8/15
SignalDancer (May 26, 2010 11:59:32 PM)
which doesnt work. I'm guessing the 8 should have 9 points in there somewhere?
SignalDancer (May 26, 2010 11:59:54 PM)
for the middle column
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:01:02 AM)
Are all your merits/flaws from the players guide or do i need to look at the tribe book as well? (just to speed this up)
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:02:54 AM)
...
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:03:16 AM)
Something wrong?
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:03:29 AM)
no tribe book except whisper catchiung
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:03:34 AM)
ok
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:03:40 AM)
cats out side some where
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:03:59 AM)
and isnt coming when called is all
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:04:27 AM)
little black runt any way
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:04:34 AM)
...
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:05:01 AM)
oh and the fetish is in there to
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:05:54 AM)
change fire arms to 2
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:06:00 AM)
okay firearms to do
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:06:05 AM)
you havent given me a point value for enemy
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:06:11 AM)
and i didnt see any explanation for that in your backhistory?
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:06:53 AM)
did i skip that by mistake.
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:06:59 AM)
appears you did
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:07:04 AM)
i'm still working through the rest to see if the points add up
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:08:10 AM)
brb
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:09:42 AM)
let me know when you get back
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:16:48 AM)
back
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:16:53 AM)
okay
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:17:02 AM)
i'm giving it one more look over but there are a few problems i want to go over with you
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:17:09 AM)
kk
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Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:18:05 AM)
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SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:18:40 AM)
sorry closed the wrong window
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:18:45 AM)
ah
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:19:16 AM)
okay, so the way i counted this up is you have 8 freebies spent in your abilities, 9 freebies spent in your backgrounds (total 17), 2 in willpower (total 19), and one in concentration merit (total 20)
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:19:41 AM)
your flaws add up to curiosity - 2, mono - 1, enemy ?, hatred - 3, which is already 6+15
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:19:50 AM)
so in theory you are one underspent even without enemy.
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:20:08 AM)
... ok nix enemy
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:20:09 AM)
now, that said, that's a lot of flaws. You haven't justified an enemy in your history at all so i would frankly- flat out recommend dropping it.
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:20:10 AM)
ok
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:20:51 AM)
add one to willpower
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:20:57 AM)
Ok.
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:21:04 AM)
fixed right?
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:21:28 AM)
almost
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:21:35 AM)
the other two things I need to know are backhistory items
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:21:46 AM)
k
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:21:47 AM)
1. you dont give any justification for the fetish. you should have something in there.
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:22:15 AM)
The other is, Law 4 is fairly hefty given the specialty you have in Litany. I get that it does make sense with the concept, but I would like to see more justification for it in your backstory.
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:22:16 AM)
it was given to me by my mentor so i could hunt my prey
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:22:32 AM)
write that in there, maybe why you earned such a boon from a lord?
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:22:36 AM)
just a few sentences.
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:22:53 AM)
and i passed the bar exam that requires law 4
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:23:03 AM)
which does not grant a specialty in the litany
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:23:04 AM)
as per the book
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:23:15 AM)
is what i'm saying. if you chose a specialty of human law yes, the bar is sufficient.
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:24:34 AM)
that im a member of the judges of doom a wholly specialized group of shadow lords whos only qquest in life is to find and destroty litany breakers no enough?
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:24:43 AM)
Not for a cliath.
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:24:51 AM)
If you were fostern i'd let it pass without a bit more.
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:25:03 AM)
i'm not saying no here on either count, simply that i want to see something in the history to justify it a bit more.
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:25:11 AM)
ok
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:25:26 AM)
do you want to go work on that and ping me when you are done?
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:25:40 AM)
ok i can do that
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:25:41 AM)
and once i have that i can go ahead and sanction the sheet.
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:25:44 AM)
ok then, good deal.
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:26:04 AM)
would you look at braden in the mean time?
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:26:30 AM)
yes i will
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:26:35 AM)
he technically a transfer but not eally cause i just cut hime down to base
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:26:48 AM)
so history only transfer?
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:26:50 AM)
that's fine. :D
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:26:52 AM)
and transfered his back story
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:27:03 AM)
yep
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:28:45 AM)
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Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:28:58 AM)
again
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:34:31 AM)
yeah
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:34:35 AM)
okay, so, looked over braden
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:34:45 AM)
a couple things, what is his wp supposed to be? there's a bug in the system that isn't saving it apparently
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:34:57 AM)
so i will note it in the sheet notes and then I will get to fixing the bug tommorow or friday.
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:35:54 AM)
4
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:36:19 AM)
o
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:36:22 AM)
ok
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:36:32 AM)
then just a few things. 1 kin have 21 freebies
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:36:39 AM)
unless i counted way wrong, you are 4 underspent.
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:36:48 AM)
however, you need linguistics 2 for your languages
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:36:56 AM)
so that would even out (wondering if that's another system bug that it wont save)
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:37:49 AM)
argh okay it lets me save it as 1 but not 2. i'll note that in the sheet as well and get it fixed
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:39:52 AM)
i had linguistics 2
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:39:55 AM)
i thought
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:40:31 AM)
Sheet doesnt wanna save it
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:40:35 AM)
ok
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:40:36 AM)
it's a bug in the code. i'll note it and fix it.
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:40:41 AM)
kk
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:40:53 AM)
im rewritten btw
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:41:13 AM)
okay i'll read that shortly
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:41:16 AM)
last thing on braden
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:41:20 AM)
k
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:41:22 AM)
i understand having influence
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:41:26 AM)
but i dont understand having it where you put it
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:41:30 AM)
street and underworld?
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:41:40 AM)
could you explain that to me? maybe ia m thinking something different.
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:41:42 AM)
he a musician
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:42:00 AM)
that explains street...if you are thinking like local bands and the like
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:42:04 AM)
what about underworld?
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:42:14 AM)
drug are good
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:42:29 AM)
ohhhhh.
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:42:38 AM)
okay, add that to your history but i'll go ahead and sanction braeden
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:42:41 AM)
on the condition you add that
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:42:51 AM)
drugs are good he likes to indulge and being somwhat of a star he deals with his dealers directly
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:43:08 AM)
kk
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:48:14 AM)
i need to go we finish tommorrow hun or if no problems with the history?
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:48:35 AM)
give me one sec. working with a few bugs i'm finding in the system
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:48:40 AM)
kk
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:48:43 AM)
and let me read the history and i can give it a yay/nay in a shake
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:49:30 AM)
i'm going to give it a pass
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:49:39 AM)
but those last two sentences, i'm not sure who it is sam is supposed to kill
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:49:50 AM)
you..might want to grammar edit that. in fact you should so ghostlin has a clue what you meant.
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:49:57 AM)
otherwise, i get what you were going for and it's fine.
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:51:23 AM)
ghostlin can rad my writting hes good at that in fact if it was right i might give him a heart attack
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:51:42 AM)
and we dont want that do we shakes head
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:52:02 AM)
no, but for the sanity of the OTHER sts
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:52:07 AM)
ask ghostlins help if you need to.
SignalDancer (May 27, 2010 12:52:15 AM)
as somone else may have to read that to run for you. :D but otherwise sam is sanctioned.
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:52:31 AM)
yeah
Sam Bridger (May 27, 2010 12:52:35 AM)
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