Kostya Valentin (Oct 13, 2010 12:30:47 PM)
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Kostya Valentin (Oct 13, 2010 12:30:52 PM)
thank you
Jayded (Oct 13, 2010 12:31:03 PM)
Ok things about the sheet I am not fond of
Kostya Valentin (Oct 13, 2010 12:31:17 PM)
Okies, shoot
Jayded (Oct 13, 2010 12:31:37 PM)
Galliard with an ahroun concept, Physical primary, combat heavy, and extra freebies in physical states
Jayded (Oct 13, 2010 12:32:10 PM)
Resources 4 on a high rage PC without kinfolk despite family being the justification
Kostya Valentin (Oct 13, 2010 12:32:11 PM)
One went into phyiscal, toher went into Intelligence
Jayded (Oct 13, 2010 12:32:25 PM)
and PB 4 without a lineage
Jayded (Oct 13, 2010 12:32:54 PM)
With your background right now, it supports PB 3, and resources 2
Kostya Valentin (Oct 13, 2010 12:35:08 PM)
Okay, so flesh out the background better, gotcha,
Jayded (Oct 13, 2010 12:35:45 PM)
And I'm still going to suggest you find a way to justify the resources, and for most high rage garou, that will mean kinfolk
Kostya Valentin (Oct 13, 2010 12:36:24 PM)
Easily fixed, will pull that extra rage and tuck it into kinfolk, so I can have a money manager cousin..
Jayded (Oct 13, 2010 12:36:29 PM)
Personally not going to say no to the concept, though I think it would be better as an Ahroun, but I will suggest moving points from strength to help flesh out the sheet
Kostya Valentin (Oct 13, 2010 12:36:41 PM)
and add that to kinfolk
Kostya Valentin (Oct 13, 2010 12:36:49 PM)
er sorry
Jayded (Oct 13, 2010 12:36:50 PM)
Gives the PC somewhere to go that way
Kostya Valentin (Oct 13, 2010 12:38:33 PM)
I front loaded him with the Phyiscals because its a pain in the butt to try and justify them, I still have to drag his stamina up to 4, and I still have to raise his perception and wits before I do much else attribute wise
Kostya Valentin (Oct 13, 2010 12:39:02 PM)
And I could change himi to Ahroun if you really think so
Kostya Valentin (Oct 13, 2010 12:39:18 PM)
Though I will change the conept then to Warrior Poet
Jayded (Oct 13, 2010 12:39:19 PM)
It's not that hard to justify physicals
Jayded (Oct 13, 2010 12:39:40 PM)
That I would accept alot better then sword master
Kostya Valentin (Oct 13, 2010 12:39:46 PM)
Okies
Bambi (Oct 13, 2010 12:43:14 PM)
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Kostya Valentin (Oct 13, 2010 12:43:59 PM)
Shifting him to Ahroun, frees up a Freebie which I promptly dump into Kinfolk
Jayded (Oct 13, 2010 12:44:21 PM)
Warrior Poet is fine for Galliard
Jayded (Oct 13, 2010 12:44:34 PM)
still not starting with two 4s in Physical
Kostya Valentin (Oct 13, 2010 12:45:12 PM)
So its your personal feelings against it
Jayded (Oct 13, 2010 12:45:20 PM)
And if it's Dex you keep we need to change the specialty
Jayded (Oct 13, 2010 12:45:54 PM)
no. I just don't feel that "it's hard to justify after character creation" is a valid reason to allow it
Kostya Valentin (Oct 13, 2010 12:46:26 PM)
And you don't think his background of training, justifies it?
Jayded (Oct 13, 2010 12:46:34 PM)
I actually asked the other STs they agreed
Jayded (Oct 13, 2010 12:46:45 PM)
No
Kostya Valentin (Oct 13, 2010 12:46:55 PM)
Okay, well seems I got some work to do
Bambi (Oct 13, 2010 12:47:26 PM)
or take a couple simple suggestions
Bambi (Oct 13, 2010 12:47:50 PM)
like dropping Strength to 3, and Rage to 4 giving you 6 more freebies and make your character more rounded
Jayded (Oct 13, 2010 12:48:15 PM)
yes, but on the whole other then some minor changes, and yes I consider these minor, I'm not asking you to make a new character, it's easily sanctionable
Jayded (Oct 13, 2010 12:50:42 PM)
My suggestions are such Expression 2, Kinfolk 1 from the Strength, perhaps drop the Rage 1, and put that somewhere that rounds out the concept (more kinfolk does not hurt your justifications) and Lineage
Jayded (Oct 13, 2010 12:50:56 PM)
Cause a Warrior poet needs Expression
Bambi (Oct 13, 2010 1:03:59 PM)
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Kostya Valentin (Oct 13, 2010 1:04:01 PM)
Alright, there everything moved about
Kostya Valentin (Oct 13, 2010 1:04:12 PM)
now I just got to rewrite my backstory
Kostya Valentin (Oct 13, 2010 1:06:34 PM)
If you don't mind, crunch the numbers and make sure I am right in my math
Kostya Valentin (Oct 13, 2010 1:06:53 PM)
I had to gut and shuffle a lot of things
Jayded (Oct 13, 2010 1:09:14 PM)
I don't see that Strength was dropped
Kostya Valentin (Oct 13, 2010 1:09:38 PM)
I didn't, I dropped Dex
Jayded (Oct 13, 2010 1:10:35 PM)
Ok
Jayded (Oct 13, 2010 1:10:41 PM)
that will work then
Jayded (Oct 13, 2010 1:10:55 PM)
I am going to have to go to work, but Ambi will be on for a bit more
Jayded (Oct 13, 2010 1:11:07 PM)
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Kostya Valentin (Oct 13, 2010 1:56:30 PM)
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